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ROW80 Check-in: October 21st

I sort of had a lapse of frustration with my writing and the story I’m working on in general and wound up not getting much anything done in terms of writing under the stress of trying to make myself do it, and I think that pressuring myself like that isn’t going to be a good way to get through ROW80 – so I’m going to rework my goals and system here.

Basically, for this round, my main goal is going to be to just get this draft done. The measurable part of this will be more putting a rundown of what exactly I got done that is measurable in the week on the Sunday check-ins, the main ones being entries written, entries outlined, and entries edited. I’ll probably also put in my total entries written and total handwritten pages.

I feel like this will probably help me get things done better, because instead of pressuring myself to get a certain amount of one of those things done during a week, it’s just a goal to get as much done as I’m comfortable with as long as I get a little bit of progress in and, in the long run, to finish the draft. The numbers probably won’t be very high these next few weeks, because I’m still having all of that trouble with getting back into writing, but I think I can do it.

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ROW80 Check-in: October 10th

Third check-in of the round already (I missed the first, unfortunately)! I still don’t have much to report – I’ve been doing fairly fine with my work on writing here. So far on my goals this week, I’m almost done with the one entry and have outlined two. Since I don’t have much to report yet, I’ll just talk about what the experience in general has been like so far.

The beginning of this is kind of suffering, to be honest. Getting myself to write and stay positive about it is an up-hill battle. I’ve been dealing with a lot emotionally, and the slump is really making it hard for me to write, so I really keep winding up having to make myself pick up my pen and get writing for this. I know for a fact that once I get into the system of this I will be able to enjoy it fully – it’s just a matter of keeping things running and sticking to trying to get comfortable with writing again after so long.

All in all, I have been having a lot of trouble, but I’ve been reaching my goals and getting further into the story to the point where I’m planning parts that I’m rather excited about. It’s a little hard keeping writing at the point where things haven’t picked up much steam yet, but I have to push through this development phase while I push through the “getting used to writing again” phase, so I can fully enjoy the fresher, newer parts of the story once I get in the program of things.

How is writing going for everyone, and if you’re participating, how about ROW80?

ROW80 2012: Round 4 Goals

I’m not going to go into much detail about that long, unexpected hiatus I took other than that I’ve been stressed and having a lot of trouble these past few months, but I’m finally getting back on track with productivity, so I’m coming back to the blog – for now, it’ll mainly be to keep track of ROW80 and things related to that, but I’m sure I will go back to writing my tips and etc posts eventually when I get in the hang of things again.

That being said, instead of participating in the usual National Novel Writing Month this November, I will be participating in this round of ROW80, since this time around, it’s more than a first draft I’m trying to get done – this one is going to be a second draft to what I did during Camp NaNoWriMo, this time hand-written with each ‘diary entry’ planned out along the way based on that draft I did in June. You can read about ROW80 here. It’s essentially an alternative to NaNoWriMo that lasts a bit longer and gives you more time, along with the option of setting and changing your own goals.

That being said, it’s time for me to state my goals for this round.

GOAL:  Finish 5+ Entries per week

This is really exciting. I’ve never participated in ROW80 before, and I feel like I’m getting closer and closer to finally finishing this first book in the planned series. As much as I’ve enjoyed working on it, four years is a long time and I’m so glad to finally be putting this in the direction it needs to go. My break from it after finishing the first draft in Camp NaNoWriMo was one I really needed in order to get some new ideas to throw in this draft and sort of have the time away from it I needed to be able to be refreshed and excited on the project all over again.

Needless to say, I think I’m going to enjoy this.

Buckling down on first drafts

The idea of finishing the first draft – or any draft, honestly – of your novel can be daunting sometimes.

Writing a novel isn’t ‘easy’. You have to go through a lot to make the best you can – several drafts, maybe some outlining, re-reading and editing, and so forth. When it comes down to really getting started on the first steps you’re taking other than thinking about it to getting it done – which could either be outlining or starting the first draft – it can be hard to get yourself motivated to begin.

I like to start off with a first draft that’s sort of just ‘winging it’. Pouring out the ideas and developments I’ve got in mind without really outlining it or following any sort of map for it – this will serve as that map later on. I won’t get my best work done in a first draft, anyways, and I’m much better at getting things down for the first time, I’ve found, if I’m not constricting myself to the limitations of an outline just yet. I like to get the story down and figure out the little things as I go, let myself and my characters lead the way through the story first, so instead of taking the time to create the outline before even starting the first draft, I like to reserve some time to create my mess of a first draft to get everything down beforehand as quickly and enjoyably as I can before going into the rest of the process.

Lately, I’ve been using events like NaNoWriMo, JuNoWriMo, Camp NaNoWriMo, Script Frenzy, and things of that nature to motivate myself to get the first draft done – I’ve only been participating for a short time, but thus far it’s helped me get down the first draft of a script for part of a graphic novel I’m working on developing the story for and the first draft of the first novel in a series I’ve been trying (and failing) to motivate myself to get a good first draft down for almost three years. Putting aside a month or so to get the first draft done helps me do just what I intend with the first draft – just get everything down, every development and idea I have for it, no matter how horrible it may seem, and not let myself go back and fix things as I go.

My several other attempts to start the first draft for this story didn’t work out because I kept distracting myself with editing and making every last thing perfect, second-guessing myself and stressing over making it perfect. That just doesn’t work for me, though – I need to be able to have fun with a first draft. I need to give myself a sort of playground to mess around with and figure out the nooks and crannies of my story in with my first draft. I use my first drafts of things to explore my imagination and my story, to just put down my ideas and give myself something to work from that isn’t an outline. My first draft is an attempt to let myself go wild and get every idea I have that I can get down on the story, well, down on paper (or in a document).

It helps me figure out what works and what doesn’t, and discover new things and ideas about my story that I hadn’t had before. Only then, after I’ve gotten them down in one big document with me and my ideas poured out onto it, will I go through and write an outline for the story, adding, subtracting, and changing what I need to that I can use for my next draft, one that I’ll take more time and thought for. My outlining and rewriting process are things that I will be writing posts on eventually as I tackle those things with my current projects.

The first draft definitely won’t be perfect, and I need an opportunity to let the story go wild on it’s own, to wing it and explore my ‘playground’ before I go into the rest of the process and take the time to put down a comprehensive outline. While I try to make it the best I can, I also try to make it as enjoyable and close to the ideas I have in my head as I go along with it as possible.

To get my first draft done, I remind myself frequently that it will not be perfect and is my way to get things down and have something to work from – you can’t edit a blank page, but that doesn’t mean that the page you edit has to be perfect – it just means you need to get everything down first. 

Camp NaNoWriMo: Crossing the Finish Line

Final word count: 50,214 words in total

This is basically the first event of this nature that I’ve ‘finished’ – although during my participation in Script Frenzy I did complete the draft of the script, but it was much less than what was needed to ‘win’ – and it’s a very exciting, accomplished feeling. Not only was I finally able to get down a good first draft to go from for a story I’ve been trying to get down as I want it to be for years, I was able to participate in a fun event and make a lot out of the communication and advantages that come with it, and complete the challenge. Pushing through the last paragraphs I needed to get to the total that night, I did have a lot of trouble with – but I was determined to make it through to the 50,000th word on the draft that night.

I’d already written a bit that day, earlier on, trying to get into the ‘zone’ and figure out a good word count, and I needed only about 2k more to finally make it to 50k. I was at a scene that I hadn’t intended to put in, but it just came as an advantage to me – it was something I could definitely write a lot out of. I’d decided to throw my main character a bit of a bone and let him have a good night, but not without a little trouble and definitely not without throwing in a big plot point that I’d been building up to from the beginning. It was a big revelation, and my character had a lot of trouble admitting it (it took him a few paragraphs of trying to explain things before he was able to just write it) even to his journal.

Of course, I’d been planning to make this one carry over the course of journal entries spanning throughout a year, getting to know my characters and their situation, but something about the way this scene had ended just felt incredibly right. It was perfect for an ending to this first story – I’d gotten to know not only my main character, but his family, his friend, the other characters involved, his situation, and I’d built up to this revelation throughout the story as I’d worked it.

Of course, there are things that I need to fix and change and the entire thing is going to be re-written (and probably a little longer) – there are plot devices that I need to weave in better and I need to put in some more information, and I need to fix the ‘time-line’ of most of it. I’d somehow made this draft, despite being over 30 entries, take place in a much shorter period of time than intended, and that’s… not really going to work well. I’m going to stretch it out over a few more months so I can give some more development to different things and try to figure out different things in the next draft. I didn’t set up for the first one to end at that point, so there are obviously some bits that I held back on and of course, being a fairly quickly written draft, there are a few inconsistencies and a lot of things I need to fix, but it’s going to be serving as a good tool during my outlining process and a good starting place.

Camp NaNoWriMo has been a good tool for me in finally getting the ball rolling here. I’m excited for what’s to come next – I’m going to spend July pouring over this first draft and working out an outline on it. I’m hoping that my next posts on writing and the process will be on either first drafts or making outlines and how I go about those two things – whether the first one that will come is going to be one or the other, I’m not sure, but I’m betting I’ll probably cook something up about first drafts before outlining. I’ve already started on that bit, but I think it’d make more sense judging by my outlining process to write about this whole first draft business first.

How is the last week of Camp NaNoWriMo going for you? Have you crossed the finish line, or are you expecting to?

Camp NaNoWriMo Week Three

Word count: 45,406 and counting

Week three is at it’s end and, while not necessarily keeping directly on my schedule, Camp NaNoWriMo has been going wonderfully for me. I’ve been making good progress with my story and writing, and currently have over 30 entries for my WIP done. As I’ve said a few times before, this run with the story has been so much more fun for me than the previous attempts at getting out a full draft. I’m much more confident about this version and, come November, when it should be done, I’m going to put it away for a week or two before I go back and review the entries. In reviewing them, I’ll have my handy dandy notebook where I’ll do an overview of basically what I touched base on in each one that I’d like to be kept in the final draft, add in what I want to be put in there, make any changes I need/add any new entries or parts of the plot, basically make an outline for the rewriting through looking at my mess of a first draft from this NaNo-season.

What I’ve loved the most about this experience in general, aside from the writing itself, is being able to share what I’ve been able to do and my new developments. Participating in the wordsprints and interacting with other people doing these types of events, being able to experience the whole thing with others. My lovie and I have been working at this together, and talking to him about the whole mess has been one of the best parts of it. I’m not too sure where he is in terms of word-count, but regardless of that, being able to enjoy Camp NaNoWriMo with him and the sort of ‘community’ of people participating has been amazing.

As for the most enjoyable parts of the writing, I’m not sure exactly what I’d pick. Perhaps the way I can get into character so easily, the way I can explore him so much easier through these journal entries and give him a very prominent voice while doing so, or the way I can come up with an idea on the fly to write about when nothing in particular that I’ve planned ahead for is going on and make something of it just to get those words in and getting something a lot better than I expected out of it. Maybe it’s the progress on the story in general, or, more in particular, the character development (developing characters has always been one of my favourite parts of writing – I love getting to know my characters and sort of see what I can come up with for them, starting out with one idea and as I write and go through the development of the story and it’s draft, wind up with something completely different than I thought).

This story is basically a sort of warm-up for the series itself – the one I’m writing now isn’t exactly intended to be published. I guess you could call it a bonus, an exploration of the character before things really start up. It’s a way to get the ball running and leading up to a good place to start the first book I have planned for the series. What I’m thinking I’ll do is, when I’m working through the final draft for this, post it gradually on here to not only get feedback to help me as I go but make this sort of ‘bonus’ available to what could be potential readers of the series. Not only would it be a good way to figure out my writing style and get into my characters, it’d also be a fun way to get people’s opinions on it and see if anyone likes it.

Thankfully, I’m not making all of the developments here – what I plan to do is to  use this as an opportunity to learn about who my characters are and what situation they’re in at the beginning of the series. While I intend to make this the best I can make it, I’m trying to really save the best for what happens after, for the stories that will follow and will – hopefully – be published one day. For now, it’s just a dream and a goal, but I’m doing everything I can to work towards it. That just happens to be participating in events like these – I have other projects that I need to get done, and those projects will be a big focus of mine outside of these events.

In other words, the first drafts for each of these stories will more than likely be (mostly) written during NaNoWriMo events. I enjoy these types of events so much, they help keep me inspired and get everything down quick without going back to edit and basically help me through the process of getting a first draft down. I’ve been thinking on these things often this past week, and (at least at the moment) this is what the plan for the future is. I’m unbelievably excited to make more progress on this current project I’m working on now and see where it goes, but I’m sure that by the end of November, I’ll probably want to take a bit of a “kinda-sorta” break from it and focus on other projects while I edit and rewrite.

I’m planning on writing 2k every day for the rest of the month, with the exception of today and the day after I hit 50k (if it’s before the very end of the month). I want to have at least 40 entries done by the end of the month, so I need to really buckle down and get what I can done. I’d like to take a break next month, but if I don’t get at least 40 entries done in June, I’ll have to cut out the break and keep working hard towards that in July.

For this last week of Camp NaNoWriMo coming up, I’m planning on trying to wrap it up with a big event in the draft so I can have an exciting finish to the month to come back to at the beginning of August. As of now, I’m not too sure what it’ll be, but I’ll be able to come up with something soon. I have a few things in mind. Whether or not they’ll be positive or negative for my main character, we’ll have to see… but knowing me, it’ll probably be something that has a pretty negative effect on it. Looking forward to it!

What do you plan on doing for this last week of Camp NaNoWriMo? How has the event been going for you so far?

Camp NaNoWriMo Week Two

Word-count: 33,875 and counting

It’s Saturday morning and week two is slowly coming to a close. The chirping of birds is practically all I hear aside from the tapping of my keys, my nose is cold and red, my ankles are covered in strange bug bites. I have been having a bit of trouble writing every day this week like I’ve wanted to, and phasing back into a schedule, but today is going to be my little fix for that.

I just finished up an entry to my current novel that I’m working on here, and clocked in my current word-count. This particular entry was taking me a while, and I’m glad it’s over, so that when the next wordsprints start up on my twitter feed, I’ll be able to jump into a new entry and new scene that I don’t have very planned out aside from making it something important and potentially plot-effecting. Thinking about it is exciting, but I’m going to let that build up until the sprints start. Until then, I’ll be working on other things – this post, my current side project, maybe even reading.

Week three is going to be exciting, I think. I’m nearing 40k – that’s really shocking me. Looking at the counter and my progress on the website, however, I’m not satisfied – it’s not steadily improving. I’ve been missing out on writing at all some days, and others, I only write a little, not enough to update on. I’m trying to get back to my entry-a-day thing, so that I can finish at least 40 -45 entries before the month’s end. I’m going to be trying to make a steady and fair amount of progress daily, even on my birthday (tomorrow), and find whatever ways possible to keep the writing fun and exciting.

When July comes, I’ll write a few entries, maybe one or two per week, but focus mainly on reading and drawing throughout the week with writing more prominent on the weekends. Towards the end of next month, I’ll probably start steadily writing more entries to get prepped for the beginning of the next session of Camp NaNoWriMo, in August, which I’ll be continuing this current novel for (adding 50k new words, though, of course!), and after that’s done, I’ll probably flip back to the July ‘schedule’ until November comes around. I’ll still be keeping up with trying to write a blog entry or two per week, and maybe working on short stories, but I’m thinking my other two projects, my big one that I worked on for Script Frenzy and my current side one, will probably take the reins more in-between NaNoWriMo months and after November, which is when I’m hoping to finish this novel’s draft up.

I’ll probably leave it be for a bit, and a few months later, come back to it and work out editing notes, get down a sort of timeline to work from to rearrange and reference during rewrites and during the writing of the rest of the series, so that when working on another book in the series, I don’t have to pull out the full draft and search through it, but rather just look at my timeline/detailed summaries for personal reference. I’m not sure what all I’ll be working on aside from this current project and blog-posts in terms of actually getting writing done, and that is a bit scary to think about – with all of that time in-between 2012 NaNo season’s end and 2013 NaNo season’s beginning, which is when writing will probably take control again, I’m not sure what I’ll be writing to keep myself sharp.

Aside from my planning for the future after NaNoWriMo season for 2012 is over, things have been going fairly well. I’m hoping to improve on all of the things that have been hindering me along the way during week two, and get back on schedule today.

How has week two been treating you? Any problems, or anything opposite of that?